小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hello,my name is Amy .I have a good friend.Her name is Coco.She is a very lovely girl.She like pink very much .Her favourite is rice.She likes sing.She likes to learn English.She is the tallest girl in our class.Wo often call her"giraffe".She like it very much.All of us likes to play her.