2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Now,education plays a critcial role in employment and earning.Above the statistical chat in 2011,there are diffeient degrees and unemployment rates and earnings. Clearly.The less degree,the less unemploment and earnings.For exemple,the people who less than high school diploma,its unemployment rate reach in 14.1% and average median weekly earnings are only $451while someone who have a doctor degree or preffational degree reduce unemployment rate and increase median weekly earning.In concusion,education pays in higher ernings and lower umployment rates.