2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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Good relationship with our teachers means teachers not only are they my study leader,but also they are my close friends.As a teacher,she/he devoted to students with her/his most of energy.they also take care of her/his student.So,these teachers are popular to students. In life,students should often have convercation with teachers,when they are in trouble.teachers also ask them about learning and life.So,teashers and students can closer.