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Scope of business: Retailed: Prescription drug, OTC, Chinese patent medicine, chemical medicine preparations, antibiotic agents, biochemicial drug, biological products(except preventive products)( Valid Date:2014.11.26), thermometer, sphygmomanometer, magnetic therapy apparatus, medical absorbent cotton, medical absorbent gauze, medical masks, home use glucometer, the blood glucose strip, diagnosis of pregnancy test paper( colloidal gold test paper),condom, contraception cap, wheelchair, medical sterile gauze, a class of medical equipment and for the record, disinfectant, cosmetics, general merchandise; Retailed and wholesaled: prepackaged food, dairy product (included infant formulas) (hold a valid license). [The business activities shall be subject to laws, administrative provisions, except obtain the relevant license] Guangzhou Administration for Industry and Commerce Branch of Yuexiu