2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a strong Will We all know that a strong will plays a critical role in our dairy life.More and more matters show that a strong will makes success.For example,a famous teenage name Liuwei has a strong will and his tract gives us a deep expession.Although he lose his lend when he was young,he make a great success in many asepts,including swimming filed sport filed,espesially piano.As for normal people,we hard to record any one of this,however, he did them.If you pay more attention to it,you will distinguish what is difference between us and find that he is of a strong will.Deeply,you will find that a reason of successful people all own a strong will when they work on onething.In a other world,only own a strong will can make a grand fate.Meanwhile,it is suitable for student to study.If you can not consiste on study hard,you will not become a useful people.