2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。

Nothing Succeeds Without a strong Will We all know that a strong will plays a critical role in our life.More and more matters show that a strong will makes a success.For example,Liuwei who is a famous person has a strong will and his tract gives us a deep expression.Although he lost his lend when he was young,he makes a great success in many adepts,including swimming and sport,especially piano.As for normal people,we hard to record any one of this,however, he did them.If you pay more attention to it,you will distinguish what is difference between us and find that he is of a strong will.Deeply,you will find that a reason of successful people all own a strong will when they work on one thing.In aother world,only own a strong will can make a fate.Meanwhile,it makes a appropriate way for student to study.If you can not consist on the study hard,you will not become a useful person.