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托福独立写作模拟题:大学是一生中最重要的时光

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要求：: Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Read and think about the following statement:The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
题干讲解:
本题要求考生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示:
1、大学里是学习可以谋生知识的最好时机。
2、大学里是交朋友和发展亲和力的最佳时机。

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