2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的学术词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Along with the rapid development of technology,modern inventions are developed by human beings. the most fantastic invention I consider is the computer. since the computer emerged in our daily life, the connection between computer and people are getting closer and closer. First and foremost, when it comes to computer, the influence it brings is always the top issue that attract people's attention. Yet as old asying goes, everything coin has two sides , it provides the convience of person's communication, education ,as well as business. nevertheless, the dependence is possible shaped during people's using computer . What's more, as a symbol of modern society, computer plays a important role in people's daily. there are various functions it could produce. firstly, when some difficult problems we are unable to cope with, it is a good method to turn to computer. secondly, provided we are away from home and we miss our parents very much, we can find a way to communicate with them by using computer , like video call , not only can we diag instantly,but also save money. All in all , in contemporary society, computer is a key member of our big family, as a new coming out goods , we should recognize both its merits and demerits , and try our utmost to avoid the demerits . furthermore, we are supposed also to value its merits , and make full use of the good ones.