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Nowadays,with the development of economy, we , as a university student,can get more and more money from our parents. How can we use this money is a problem we should consider carefully As for me ,I believe that we had better use money carefully in daily life . We can use coupons to buy food or clothes in the supermarket if possible. It is convenient and economical to look for group-buy when we eat or travel outside.What's more, we can save some money to do meaningful things.As we all know, there are still a great number of students in western area of China can not afford to go to school. If we can make plan of using money and do not intend to pursuit of luxury life. We will save quite a lot of money to help those who are in need.What a difference we can make. Though what we have discussed above, we can easily draw an conclusion that using money carefully is a little but meaningful thing.May be a small sum of money you saved can change a poor student's life.
