题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
On maintaining trust Nowadays,with the developing of our society and internet ,we can konw even everything. We can get information easily from TV and newspaper. No doubt that our life will be more better , but may also lack of personal space. So,it is difficult to keep trust to others . If it lost, it can be hard for us to make friends with people .You can not deal with the relationship well. What is more , the less you trust others the more loney you feel . Form my own perspective ,every one needs ineed friends .No matter what ever , there is always need to open our heart for people who real care about us. Only when you let them in ,can you have friends .