2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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We can learn from the graft,education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rate.Most of people are persue for higher education,but after they graduating,they will find it is a big problem to find a admirable job.so there is a big arguement about whether we should receive higher education. as far as i am concerned,although the survey is not positive,but knowledge is still play an important roll in our daily life.