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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2050
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

要求

1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句比重稍微偏高,文中有句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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In recently,many parents send their kids to all kinds of art class,for example dancing,singing and piano class.It's very popular for kid to participate in art class around. Many people believe that sending kids to art class is to help kids to spend their after school time. What's more,art classes can help kids improve their art education. But there are also some people argue that a lot of kids do not enjoy the time which they spend on art class .The reason they come to study art is their parents' words.They are obliged to obey their parents. In my opinion,whether kids should go to art class should be decided by kids.If parents do love their children,then respect their choices

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