题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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In recently,many parents send their kids to all kinds of art class,for example dancing,singing and piano class.It's very popular for kid to participate in art class around. Many people believe that sending kids to art class is to help kids to spend their after school time. What's more,art classes can help kids improve their art education. But there are also some people argue that a lot of kids do not enjoy the time which they spend on art class .The reason they come to study art is their parents' words.They are obliged to obey their parents. In my opinion,whether kids should go to art class should be decided by kids.If parents do love their children,then respect their choices
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