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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多。
OVERCOME TEMPTATION Nowadays,Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life,such as,we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.Nevertheless,I do not think it is a good way to save money but to overcome our own temptation. As we know,time is money for mankind. The first stage ,we should save every minute and second to do useful things,for example ,travel and go shopping,within time to buy what we need,the rest of time to make money,for me ，it is a way about temptation to self-discipline. Last but at least,those who lived in 21 century,will be more and more go after go shopping online,because it is so easy and convenient for internet users.However,as far as you can see,it is not a good way to save money but waste,the reason why you are not deposit too much money in your account.What is the best way to save money is overcome your own temptation,especially merely according to its introduction and picture. To sum, as far as I am concerned,the best way to save money is to overcome temptation.
