2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；请注意分段。

From the picture .we know that ,when the father asked hisdaughter how was school?The gril ash her father to read her blog .No one can deny the fact that the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication. I'm admitted that the internet have a number of advantages .for example .it is easily to found out the information about knowledge and more convently to communication with the oerson far away from others city Ever coins has two sides .however ,human beings ,without give ant consideration to the life in reality.internet decline the chance of face-to-face talks .it takes a considerable of time online result of the time we go to play on park and to travel is sharply elimination. personally.we can't ignore the impact from internet ,rationally when we use it .in order to chop the impact of the internet on interpersional communicatiion.