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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分57.0分
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作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。

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From the picture .we know that ,when the father asked hisdaughter how was school?The gril ask her father to read her blog .No one can deny the fact that the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication. I'm admitted that the internet have a number of advantages .for example .it is easily to found out the information about knowledge and more convently to communication with the oerson far away from others city . Every coins has two sides .however ,human beings ,without give ant consideration to the life in reality.internet decline the chance of face-to-face talks .it takes a considerable of time online result of the time we go to play on park and to travel is sharply elimination. personally.we can't ignore the impact from internet ,rationally when we use it .in order to chop the impact of the internet on interpersional communicatiion.

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