句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
As a Chinese and your friend,I know you are going to visit taiwan island. And I will introduce it to you.Here are as follows. To begin with,taiwan island is the largest island of China,which is located off the eastwest of Fujian province and is surrounded by oceans.Then,it covers 3600km and its population is 20,000,000. That's so large.In addition,equally various are the natural sources,which consist of bananas ,rice,tea and so on.As a matter of fact,all of them are well known throughout the world.Last but not least there are quality sencery and climate attracting visitors. hope you enjoy your trip.