文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次较为清晰。
As a Chinese and your friend,I know you are going to visit the taiwan island. And I will introduce it to you.Here are as follows. To begin with,the taiwan island is the largest island of China,which is located off the east-west of Fujian province and is surrounded by oceans.Then,it covers 3600km and its population is 20,000,000. That's so large.In addition,equally various are the natural sources,which consist of bananas ,rice,tea and so on.As a matter of fact,all of them are well known throughout the world.Last but not least there are quality scenery and climate attracting visitors. Hope you enjoy your trip.