2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

The Way to Success Every one wants to be a successful man .However ,some of them are not fortunate enough to find the way to success.And I will share some of my opinions with you . First.If one person wants to succeed.A strong will is necessary.With a strong will,you will not feel proud if you achieve a little and you will not lose heart if you come across some difficulties.That is the power of will. Second.I think,you also need to be patient.A lot of people are elites and their will are strong enough.They get abilities and are intelligence or brilliant.You just need to be patient before the opportunity show up and don't be hesitate to capture it.Don't be upset ,you are bound to succeed. Third.There is a saying that you are who your friends are.This tells us that sometimes,your friends are of great importance to you.They are not those people who can drink or play with you.They can help you in your career.Make some good friends who might help you in the future.That will be very helpful. Every roads lead to Rome while there are a lot of ways leading to success.Every successful man has his own history.We just can't copy others.Capture every moment to improve yourself and success will be around the corner.