题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
When it comes to the topic of Man and Computer everybody has its own interpretation. But an idea goes that the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer, which reveals people should have a flexible thinking. It is very essential. There is no denying the fact that computers are becoming more and more intelligent. When people using computers, they can actually use less their mind and finish their work effectively and perfectly. Computers make our life convenient. As time goes by, an increasing number of people rely on the computer because they believe that using their mind is not necessary and tired. Thus, they suppose their think like a computer. We should take some effective measures to solve this problem. To be more specific, we need to think about the problem by ourselves and solve them easily, which is very indispensable. Only when we proficient in dealing with problems can we fully enjoy our thinks and live a merry life.