2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题TASK2

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

Can ads bring positive effects for daily life? For more than a decade the issue has divided the public, and even today it still sparks bitter controversy among the whole society. Some people say that plenty of evidence has proved ads enhance the development of the commodity market. It is undeniable that a good advertisement’s ability of attracting customers and increasing sales. In addition, adverting can provide more opportunities for people to satisfy the needs of customers and lead the trend. Meanwhile, the advertising also boosts competition between manufactures, hereby, most price is reasonable instead of monopoly. Yet, some people believe that the public's life is on the brink of collapse due to advertisements. Initially,advertisements interrupt most of TV programs when people sit in front of screens, which lead TV audiences detest these episodes so that they change channels all the time. Furthermore, most advertisements always contain exaggerative and false elements to attract more people. Finally, some ads also appeal the public to pursue a comfortable and luxury life which is not only increasing the financial burden of family but also spreading social unhealthy tendency. In sum, personally, my view is that ads bring us many effects which are visual arts, including the novel innovative designs and background music, although there are several shortages. I believe that the government has the right to set down relevant laws to supervise advertising to maintain harmonious society and the public should also select valuable ads rationally. Only through this way can ads enrich our life.