小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I have a good friend.Her name is May.She doesn't like by bike go to school. She goes to school always at 7 o'clock. She is very beautiful.She has a pair of big eyes and a small mouth. All the people like to play with her.She likes to read story books and She loved to tell story for us very much.