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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Nowadays, various kinds of reference books for college students have come into existence. And many students gain so much that they soon find themselves totally relying on these books. It should be admitted that reference books have brought great convenience to students. And conversely, over reliance on these books has also caused negative effects. Firstly, students who have got reference books are more likely to believe all the contents in the books and neglect teachers instructions. Secondly, with reference books, many students tend to be absent from class and become lazy to think about how to solve problems on their own. Last but not least, there are so many different kinds of reference books that a great number of low quality ones are also among them, which will lead to students confusion.

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