2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and man With the development of the digital,computer plays an important role in our life.The computer's function is so stronger that make our life more better.But every coin has two side,the computer use so widely also having disvantage. Some people think the computer is goog thing can help we do some work efficiently.For example,the computer can deal with the big data quickly and exactly.