2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

As we all know,a strong will is the important commitment to succeed.If we were no a strong will,we could't try our best to achieve our dream. For instance,liuwei,a disable teenager,was regard as "The most brave boy".When he was a child,he lost his arms,but,he didn't lost his heart.Thanks to the strong will,he overcomes a lot of difficulties as well as challenges.To be honest,as a healty guy,I can't reward those achievement.So it is the gap between liuwei and I. As for students,If we didn't study hard,we would't become a useful man in the nation.