2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请注意分段。

Nowadays, more and more people pay a lot of attention on computers,they talk with their friends and families through the internet,and also finish their work by using it.there is no doubt that computer play an important role in humans' life. It brings so much convinence that almost all of us use it to do things