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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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nowadays there is a gorwing concern over Education Pays. From the above we can draw:in 2011,Doctoral degree Unemployment rate in 2.5%,Medianweekly earnings for 1551.and Professional degree in 2.4%,Medianweekly earnings for 1665.and Masters degree in 3.6%,Medianweekly earnings for 1263,BEchelors degree in 4.9,Medianweekly earnings for 1053.associate degree in 6.8%,Medianweekly earnings for 768.Some college,no degree in 8.7%,Medianweekly earnings for 719.High school diploma in 9.4%,Medianweekly earnings for 638,and Less than high school diploma in 14.1,Medianweekly earnings for 451.average unemployment rate in 7.6%,average Medianweekly earnings for 797. this phenomenon exists for a number of reasons,First The level of education caused many people to acquire knowledge and skills,second Does not have the knowledge and skills of the people can only do physical labor,third,In terms of the same degree, the level of professional skills also determines the level of income。 therefore,we would better come to the conclusion that We should not only master the theoretical knowledge, but also master the professional skills, combined with the theory and skills, to better reflect their own value。

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