2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

从句使用量稍显不足；文中能较恰当地使用学术词汇，但存在较多拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays, many of the goods exist a phenomenon of excessive packaging. For example, moon cakes are exquisite packaging of cooperation , ect. There are the following reasons for this phenomenon. Above all, saler think it promote sales volume of the fine packging, becuase consumer like beautiful goods. Secondly, people generaly consider products is well throught fine packging when they go shopping. They believe in you get what you pay for. At a result, the popularity of excessive packaging. In my opinion, I not agree with excessive packging that it's waste resource, at the same time also break environment.