2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多。

Nowadays, many of the goods exist a phenomenon of excessive packaging. For example, moon cakes are exquisite packaging of cooperation, ect. There are the following reasons for this phenomenon. Above all, sealer think it promote sale volume of the fine packaging, because consumer like beautiful goods. Secondly, people generaly consider products is well throught fine packging when they go shopping. They believe in you get what you pay for. At a result, the popularity of excessive packaging. In my opinion, I not agree with excessive packging that it's waste resource, at the same time also break environment.