2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Wih the development of the Internet,oonline shoppng bring up quickly.It is popolar for people to do shopping on the internet.However, is it good for people ? It is obvious that online shopping is very convenient for us ,there are many goods which are abundant and fashion.What's more,online shopping is a good way for busy people to save time. Not only there are many benefits on online shopping,bu also it is bad for us sometime.Shopping online is dangerous for us,it is easy to do some economy critim for some people.What's more,the goods'quality can be sure. In my opinion,we should be wise about online shopping,we should make good use of the advantage of the online shopping,and take measure to avoid the harmful side of it.