2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

There is an onslaught of technology on the modern classroom. Teachers, administrators, parents, and students alike are being told that technology is the software with which we can all sharpen our education system. Technology can open doors, expand minds, and change the world. Computers can definitely help students in a big way to learn. Similarly they can help teachers in teaching more effectively. But computers can never replace teachers completely. To begin with teachers are needed to decide and tell computer software developers what the computers will teach and how they will teach it. And on the other hand, having physical teachers in the classrooms is advantageous because they can teach personal interaction, and also, teacher-directed learning is underpinned by personal awareness and a focus on students. All in all, although there are many benefits of using computers in the classroom but I certainly do not think that they can replace teachers. The most possible situation is that computer and teacher exist in harmony and play a indispensable role in our study lives.