2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(18):节约型社会

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As a student,I think we should attach the significance to saving. And we can also do something that is in support of saving society. Here are some suggestions To begin with,eating too many snacks even beyond discription does harm to saving and our health. Next,we just need to pay attention to fundamental clothes,which contribute to saving.In addation,not only is water saved,but electricity also is saved.Finally if you are an exdraordanity student,your pen must survive up to your expectation