4. 文具方面。
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
As a student,I think we should attach the significance to saving. And we can also do something that is in support of saving society. Here are some suggestions To begin with,eating too many snacks even beyond description does harm to saving and our health. Next,we just need to pay attention to fundamental clothes,which contribute to saving.In addation,not only is water saved,but electricity also is saved.Finally if you are an extraordinary student,your pen must survive up to your expectation