2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

In the last century,we only can write a letter to communicate with the relative in a long distance.Nowadays we can connect with the other continent people right now with a E-mail and facebook. We saved a lot of time by the sharply developed technology. Through the internet we can realize the last news about our friends and can express the new happy or sad things firstly to them. however, it is truly a double-edged sword because a lot of persons who called "home boy" don't go out to work severely rely on the net.They can do everything by computer and cellphone in home. And it's a serious phenomenons that popularly impair our young adults. In a word, we should correct used the internet to enjoy our modernized lives.