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【题目要求】
Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
【写作分析】
第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段：看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about children’s recreational activities. However, whether watching TV is bad or beneficial has triggered a heat debate. My view is that much time on TV programs have more negative effects than positive ones and parents had better supervise what the kids watch. Firstly, watching TV can inevitably weaken children’s eyesight and form a bad habit. As plenty of programs are designed to be quite vivid and attractive, and children lack of self-discipline, so they are easy to confine them in the comfortable sofa with a pack of delectable snacks for consecutive hours and then become true couch potatoes. Secondly, children are quite possible to be affected mentally and spiritually by some indecent or bloody pictures. For instance, lots of teenagers are also addicted to the well-known series “Sex and the City” which is full of sexual scenes and has ever stirred the world, and the spy drama “Nikita” which is of plenty of violence. These works with cruel and violent and pornographic details must affect children’s growth little by little, so they should be drawn away from young generations. Thirdly, it is also a time-waste business. TV series always have a couple of seasons and each episode lasts at least half an hour, which naturally result in precious time passing by quietly and quickly second by second. This is not to say watching TV is of no use or help at all. There are some public service programs about environment protecting, resources saving, families caring, or low carbon lifestyle that have also great impact on children’s attitudes and values towards the world and people in a positive way. Some on education, technology, science can help broaden horizon and provide valid information. In summary, watching TV has many negative sides and children should not spend too much time on it. Meanwhile, some useful and healthy programs should not be exclusive. Parents can filter and choose programs for kids and control the time, only by doing so, can children harness TV effectively.
