Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the picture, the education pays is regard as the jobs. In 2011,less than high school diploma median weekly earning is 451,the unemployment rate is 14.1%,but the doctoral degree median weekly earning is 1551 and the unemployment rate is 2.5%, so the more we pay in education,the more we earning,the less we unemployment.