雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Along the national economic development, more and more people prefer to spend funds travelling outside even going abroad. To have a visit in our own country could not be satisfied with persons. Why do we have willing to go around other countries? Curious, excellent experiences and so on. However, there are both positive and negative effects. First of all, it can span and extend the visions of adolesent and office workers, let them have fun besides study and jobs. Moreover, it can arise people who feel despressed the passion in life. And travel is such a suitable method for people in cities to deal with pressure. Second, to go out help people to have more opportunities to have different dishes and realize better cultures. It make us to be a wise person.