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文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是学术词汇使用较少；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It's hard to believe that I am going to graduate from this lovely place. Four years seems to be short. Saying goodbye is difficult for each of us but still we have to. Despite of all the hard times and tears, I am so grateful of all the things that I have went through over last four years in this beautiful university campus. The knowledge I have learned, teachers and friends I have met here will become wealth of my life. From this sea of knowledge, I have learned things that will benefit the rest of my life. Here, I've got a chance to deepen my study in English Language, which makes me be more prepared to be a English teacher. Besides, the library of campus offer us so many books and study documents that open a big window for us to see a bigger world. Still I am so thankful of the friends and teachers I have met here. Their company and help see me through a lot of difficult moments. When I feel homesick, they would come and tell me it's ok and weep tears on my face. When I have problems in the process of study, teachers always patiently give their explanation. I will never forget these. The most important thing is that this four years see my growth from a teenage girl to an adlut. Looking back, I myself can feel I am so fiffrent from the one four years ago. At the beginning, the sense of helplessness is extremely strong. I could only turn to parents who are thousands of miles away. However, now I can cope with most things by myself. That's a big change for me. Regrets are always there, but the time of campus will be the meory of lifetime. All the things I've got enable us to become a better me and prepare us for our next course of life journey.
