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Have you went to the labrary in your university? Do you know what undergraduates do in the library? If you go to library frequently, you will find fewer students there. In fact, there are many matters for this phenomenon. First of all, it is not surprised that increasing students do not like study. They prefer to sit quietly than read in library in their spare time. The further reason for this should be the develpoment of electic devices. Mobilephone and MP3 bring them a lot of funs. It is so interest that they forget the exist of the library. Last but not least, Internet is increasing popular in today's life. Our life without Internet is like the sailing without compass. Only when we search for knowleges and informations before exam, will we remeber the library. However, the library is often replaced by the Internet. Actully, it is convince for us to search information online. I like use them. At the same time, I also like reading in library. Because the quiet room and the paper of books can enhance me remeber more knowlege.
