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文章词汇使用比较恰当，学术词汇积累不足；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Have you went to the library in your university? Do you know what undergraduates do in the library? If you go to a library frequently, you will find fewer students there. In fact, there are many reasons for this phenomenon. First of all, it is not surprised that increasing students do not like study. They prefer sit quietly than read in a library in their spare time. The further reason for this should be the development of electric devices. Mobilephone and MP3 bring them a lot of fun. It is so interest that they forget the existence of the library. Last but not least, Internet is increasing popular in today's life. Our life without Internet is like the sailing without compass. Only when we search for knowlege and informations before exam, will we remember the library. However, the library is often replaced by the Internet. Actully, it is convince for us to search information online. I like use them. At the same time, I also like reading in library. Because the quiet room and the paper of books can enhance me remeber more knowledge.
