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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Have you went to the library in your university? Do you know what undergraduates do in the library? If you go to a library frequently, you will find fewer students there. In fact, there are many reasons for this phenomenon. First of all, it is not surprised that increasing students do not like study. They prefer to sit quietly than to read in a library in their spare time. The further reason for this should be the development of electric devices. Mobilephone and MP3 bring them a lot of fun. It is so interest that they forget the existence of the library. Last but not least, Internet is increasing popular in today's life. Our life without Internet is like the sailing without compass. Only when we search for knowledge and informations before an exam, will we remember the library. However, the library is often replaced by the Internet. Actully, it is convenience for us to search information online. I like use them. At the same time, I also like reading in a library. Because the quiet room and the paper of books can enhance me remember more knowledge.
