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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6299[网页划词已开启]
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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On maintaining trust Trusting is the key to keep friendship in interpersonal relationship.As we all recognize,if you not trust your close family members or friends which they will not believe you again.However,there are some crucial factors tell us that we must trust people around us. For one thing,it is the way to success.Maintaining trust,it can help us to go to success when we have difficult in doing something.Your friends will support you provided you have any problems,but you must trust them in advance.For another,trust is an essential rule in social relation,especially on business.In today's business field a person has a ability of believe another one which person will has income more than others.So that the company will have more profit when it have this characterize a person.Last but not least,the trust will reflect your morality.Somenone always treat another in any thing,which we can say the one is not an ethical person its not acknowledged by society. Maintaining trust not only above reasons.Of course,from my perspective,as long as we trust other people around us,they will believe you naturally.Doing this the world will have a fine future.

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