2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From this picture,we know that the unemployment rate and median weekly earnings in 2011.we can analyse the number from the char. In the char,professional degree is the less unemployment rate and the most median weekly earning in 2011.people who study less than high school diploma has the most unemployment rate about 14.1% and the lest median weekly earning about 451 in 2011.the average of unemployment is 7.6%.however,less than high school diploma ,high school diploma and some college,no degree is less than the average.Of course,their median weekly earnings also less than the average about797. we account form the char and get a conclusion that education pas in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.though the education pays is not degree,but the graduate's ability and habit.all the company are willing to employ some people who study in lifetime.