2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；请注意分段。

Now ,we are entering a brand era full of innoventions and technology,more and more people own their computer which has alreally paid an important role in our day-to -day life.Thus,some people think that it will change the way of life.So the issue of whether good to us or not has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in th public. There is no denying that computer bring increasingiy convenience to our life,but no gardens are without weeds.It has both advantages and disvantages.The merits,we can use the computer cheaking things,and shopping ....which can save our more time