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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46203
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句。

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Many times,we students faced with this situation where our schoolmates asked us to buy some things,like food,as we asked them what did they prefer.They always answer us like 'it's ok to me'or'as long as it's food'and even 'I don't care much about it'. According to the example above,we could gain that many college students possess a passive attitude in their life.Suppose they have a positive attitude towards life,they may clearly know what they want to get or achieve.Rather than say'Everything is fine to me'. And what can we do to correct this wrong attitude?here are some suggestions.In real life,we should make a plan and know what we want,what we don't.Secondly,be outgoing and make more friend,then,you will be more active to your life.Thirdly,possessing a positive attitude is the most import one. To sum up,we should have a positive attitude towards our life, in order to creating a brighter future.

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