Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句。
Many times,we students faced with this situation where our schoolmates asked us to buy some things,like food,as we asked them what did they prefer.They always answer us like 'it's ok to me'or'as long as it's food'and even 'I don't care much about it'. According to the example above,we could gain that many college students possess a passive attitude in their life.Suppose they have a positive attitude towards life,they may clearly know what they want to get or achieve.Rather than say'Everything is fine to me'. And what can we do to correct this wrong attitude?Here are some suggestions.In real life,we should make a plan and know what we want,what we don't.Secondly,be outgoing and make more friend,then,you will be more active to your life.Thirdly,possessing a positive attitude is the most import one. To sum up,we should have a positive attitude towards our life, in order to create a brighter future.