2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

In our life,many factors can influence us and bring the different result. It's said that people who have a strong willing could reach wonderful life. In my opinion, a strong will is the essential key to success.In the history ,many persons finish powerful work because they had a common virtue.That is a strong will which inspire people to find out success.As a student,I think we should learn study hard and keep a strong will to enrich our knowledge.If we can insist study,I believe we can be a success person.