托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Movies and television occupy an important position on our daily life. From my point of views,I am agree that movies and television have more negative effects than positive ones on young people’s behavior.Although young people may lean some positive behavior, they always will imitate the people’s behavior which appear in movies and television, for example, violent behavior and words,strange hair style and clothes, or misleading thoughts, even if affect their creativity. Movies and television always add some violent drastic frames so that attract more audience to watch its program.However,some young people will imitate it which appeared in the violent frames of films,they assume it is so cool and brave.Also, that is one of reasons why increasing tragedies arise in campus.It is not rarely that often appear in news what report about young people murder ,attack governmental Internet or take place gunslinging in campus.Once,“I though it is so cool.”a commit murder crime of young people said when he was reported.It is not hard find that some young people have strong imitate ability from movies and television. Besides,strange hair and clothes of movies was imitated after young people watched movies.They only are imitate instead of keep themselves style.And wherever young people will make some strange behavior.Hardly does they have a good attitude when they in conflict with others.It is easily that they will accept any new points when affected movies role’s thoughts.This is not only will misleading they thoughts,but also will affect their creativity.It will form the situation which some young people consider evildoer is stupid or good person always can defeat bad person after they watch a number of cartoons .So that they will make stupid mistakes when they have to face danger. In sum,it is not hard to look at movies and television will make great influence,especially,negative affects more than positive affects.