Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
In recent decades, some people think that it's wasting time to study at school. Some people don't learn much but can also have big success. I disagree with this kind of opinion. Anyway, a higher educational degree could bring you a lower unemployment rate and help you get higher salary. According to the current population survey, we can see what it works easily. Most people who have less than a high school diploma can only get 451 dollars a week and the unemployment rate is high up 14.1%. If you have a high school diploma, you can earn 638 dollars a week. People who have a high school diploma are better than people who have less than a high school diploma, and the unemployment rate is 9.4%. People who can go to college but don't have degrees seem better than people who have high school diploma. However, if you have a degree, no matter what degree you have , associate, bachelor or master degree, you are much better than people who don't have any degree. There is a strange phenomenon. People who have professional degree can earn more than people who have doctor degree and it's unemployment rate lower. Although there is some strange phenomenon, have a higher degree is better than lower degree is not a wrong statement. If you want to earn money and you are not intelligent, you have to learn hard.