2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；能够使用一些简单的从句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Nowdays, The computer become more and more important in human daily life. The whitecollar deal with their business on the computer, and many students also been asked to do some of their homework on the computuer. Computer changes our lifes a lot since it came out. It bring some things good to people , but also bring some bad things to people. The business become easy than before in company, the staff could contact with their clients by email and get reply in a short time. And you also can share many knowledges from the internet on the computer. However, the bad things is that many students who can't control themselves well indulge themselve into the computer games and dilike to go to school.