2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays, the computer becomes more and more important in human daily life. The white-collar deals with their businesses on the computer, and many students also been required to do some of their home works on the computer. The computer changes our lives a lot since it came out. The computer brings some things good to people, but also brings some bad things to people. For example, It becomes easier than before to do business in company, the staff could contact with their clients by email and get the reply in a short time. You also can share much knowledge from the internet on the computer. However, many students who can't control themselves and indulge themselves into the computer games and dislike going to school.